A fantasy adventure following a young messenger and a stern guard on their quest for peace.

Chapter 1: Page 38

November 24, 2014 in Chapter 1: Rewriting Wrongs
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Chapter 1:  Page 38
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Author Notes:

Alicia the Bard November 24, 2014 edit delete
Alicia the Bard
At one point, this was two pages, but I thought it helped the pacing to combine them. I was afraid two pages would have drawn everything out for too long.

Comments:

Stever November 24, 2014 edit delete reply
Stever
I love the intensity in that last panel!
Alicia the Bard November 24, 2014 edit delete reply
Alicia the Bard
I'm super glad to hear it, and know it is successful. I was nervous on rather it would read well or not.
Skweeee November 24, 2014 edit delete reply
Skweeee
I agree with Stever.

Also, good call on combining the pages. All the panels flow together quite nicely I think.
Alicia the Bard November 24, 2014 edit delete reply
Alicia the Bard
Thank you! :D
Sleeper November 24, 2014 edit delete reply
Sleeper
Agreed, very nice flow
Alicia the Bard November 24, 2014 edit delete reply
Alicia the Bard
Thank you!
dpat57 November 25, 2014 edit delete reply
dpat57
Lookin' good, reading well, just wasn't sure what was going on with that sword in panel #2, for a moment I wondered if it was a sword.
Alicia the Bard November 25, 2014 edit delete reply
Alicia the Bard
Oops. I was going for a design based off of a fencing foil. I'll have to pay better attention to my work to avoid confusion in the future. Sorry about that; but thank you for letting me know.