A fantasy adventure following a young messenger and a stern guard on their quest for peace.

Chapter 1: Page 25

August 25, 2014 in Chapter 1: Rewriting Wrongs
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Alicia the Bard August 25, 2014 edit delete
Alicia the Bard
Originally this page was not planned in the script. It wasn't until I was working on the pencils for the scene that I thought an extra page really focusing on Zaki and his struggle was needed. I lucked out that it meshed so well in the pacing that I did not need to make any changes to the now pages before or after it.

Comments:

AeroZero August 27, 2014 edit delete reply
AeroZero
I like the story so far! Your fantasy world is pretty original to me (a desert-based fantasy land is super cool!) and I like the characters.

Blood is usually pretty dark in high concentration, almost black, so making it a dark red/almost black could read as 'blood' a bit better, and not sweet, sweet barbecue sauce :>
I like the touch of the panels becoming warmer colored as Zaki goes to stab the monster, gives it a sense of urgency.
Alicia the Bard August 27, 2014 edit delete reply
Alicia the Bard
Aww, thank you!

Thanks for the tip. I'll try it out and see how it looks. :)

Yay! Success! That's what I was hoping for.
Randew January 9, 2019 edit delete reply
Ouch ! He got BOTH arms bitten
Alicia the Bard January 9, 2019 edit delete reply
Alicia the Bard
Close-quarters combat = not his specialty. Actually he's not a fighter, but A for effort!